Friday, November 3, 2017

The crazy lawnmower

Goal :


  • Retell a story  in my own words


  • Improve my spelling in my witting


Let me introduce you to my new invention, I will  tell you about it, no i’m actually not going to tell you anything you will have to read the story. If you want to know sit back and relax because you are in for a treat. Oh by the way I am Hemi I love to invent  so let's move on.


One day I was walking home from school and I saw a blur as I walked closer I saw it was dad. “I wonder what he wants this time.” “ Hello son how was your day of school “ “ good i guess “” well do you want to start the lawns  ”” I  knew he was up to somethin “


So I walked over to the backyard and it was very, very, very, very long.  I wanted to invent a gadget so I don’t have to mow the lawns. So in the evening I snuck out of my window and I found dad in the shed so I slowly backed out and went back to my room. I tried a second time and my sister was in there and she was dancing so I went back to my room, and I  tried a third time and guess what  if you are thinking it was free it wasn’t my mum was talking to her friend  on the phone so I stayed behind the shed  and something was rustling but finally mum came out, it was 9.00 o'clock at night. I  snuck into the shed and and started to explore around and then I came across some rusty scissors and a old nose picker and a laser a blender and 4 steak knives and some guitars strings and a computer. Bang pop scroo I think my dad heard me. Dad walked in then he walked out so I crept out of behind the boxes   and bang pop/ By the time I had finished  it was morning so I wheeled out my mysterious robot and I grabbed the cloth and behold my lawnmower I shouted in a phone and it mowed the lawns. I went inside and made myself a lemonade and relaxed. I fell asleep to the sound of a lawnmower buzzing “this is the life “ I said.

I woke up because I heard the sound of some screaming people “help help” said some people. I raced down to the center of the town and there I saw my lawnmower it was digging a hole like a big hippo. Eventually he was digging in the middle of the earth he hit the lava but he was so strong we keep the pain in and kept digging he popped out the other side of the world that wasn’t supposed to happen he fell right down. So i walked home sadly dad was on the lawn  “so where were you?” ” um in town”  but the lawns aren't mowed “um what have you been doing all this time “ hey have you seen the the blender””  no “ well you better get started on the lawns and you will do it for 4 more weeks” at dinner we were until dad started talking about the blender i didn't want to tell him what happened so i kept quiet and i already have to mow the lawns for 4 weeks .
Runaway Robot Rampage – "What happens next?" animated video from Ministry of Education on Vimeo.
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Runaway Robot Rampage – "What happens next?" animated video from Ministry of Education on Vimeo.

1 comment:

  1. WOW. mads long storie but WOW it is really good i cant believe how much effort you have put into your work for the last few days

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